The
comma splice is my favorite of the top twenty grammar errors, and on our list
it ranks as the
number eight grammar error.
number eight grammar error.
What
is a comma splice? Back in the day, the term was run-on sentence.
We’ve
already talked about the two elements you must have for a sentence to be
complete. You must have at least a subject and a verb.
You
get comma splice action when you smash two sentences together:
The
first sentence is:
The dog chased
the cat.
Dog
is the subject; chased is the verb.
The
second sentence is:
The cat climbed
a tree.
Cat
is the subject; climbed is the verb.
The
comma splice acts as the divider, but the rule is to never use a comma to
separate two complete sentences. Have you noticed how many of these errors on
the top twenty grammar error list tend to run together? Revisit error number
three: no comma in a
compound sentence.
What’s
a compound sentence? A compound sentence is two complete sentences combined with
a conjunction. The comma splice error acts as the conjunction. Other options
opposed to conjunctions are available to fix a comma splice.
As
a fiction writer, I don’t always want to use a conjunction. And, but,
or, and the rest of the conjunction
gang can sometimes slow down a reader. You could just use a period instead of
the comma splice:
The dog chased
the cat.
The cat climbed a tree.
But
the period slows down the reader even more than a conjunction. Consider the
semicolon, the bastard child of the period and the comma.
The dog chased
the cat;
the cat climbed the tree.
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